so after looking at PINK's "six senses" I came to the conclusion that a mini saga would be an interesting experiment because I already know it will take work fitting pages of detail into fifty words. Here is what I finally drafted to.
Erin grew up in a decent home with loving people. But along the way bad things shook her life out of balance. Instead of trying to balance herself she continued to sway until finally she fell and discovered that she was pregnant. But the baby made her balanced after all.
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